Your Harem Will Be Mine  Download GAMESPACK.NET

Right out of the gate the game is extremely repetitive and clumsily narrated with excessive and pointless exclamations. The character will tell you the same basic information for many times longer than necessary, all while being incredibly unlikeable and neurotic.
The introduction needs a serious rewrite. Animations and renders look fine. Look at the pictures, you decide for yourself how you feel. (there are some badly posed shots and composition is average, but you can see the model quality is fine) The plot is flimsy,characters often don’t have believability, pacing is atrocious. There are some bones to this that could be worked with, several concepts have traction, but v0.1 fumbles it all for now. I recommend against trying it until what it has so far gets heavily rewritten. None of the ideas are bad, it’s just the execution of it. I would say key things to do are to tighten up the exposition at the start and make the main character more likable. It doesn’t feel like NTR if it doesn’t feel like anyone should have wanted him to begin with.

The game tries to combine elements of an NTR storyline with a harem protagonist, and the result is not compelling nor satisfying. First, the name of the game is misleading. It sounds like the MC already has a harem and someone else is coming in to “take it over”, but instead the premise is that you’re a harem protagonist that is fated to not get the girls. As such, the dev appears to be trying to subvert the typical tropes of the harem genre. This is an interesting premise! While there is a lot of leeway in how this subversion can be done, I think the game shoots itself in the foot with many of the narrative choices it makes from the get-go: Corrupt Descent

You don’t get to name the MC (Norman), and the game even makes a point to say ‘this is HIS story, not ours’. The point of a harem MC is that they are a self-insert to create a power fantasy, so deliberately making the choice to NOT follow this (and thus subvert the dynamic into a kind of “reverse” power fantasy) is strange. Even stranger is that you still make dialogue choices for the MC, which creates further dissonance between the MC being a self-insert and their own character. I think the game should commit to one. The MC is conventionally attractive (FREAKISHLY tall, fit, described as handsome, big dick?, etc.), which is typical of a harem protagonist. The problem with this is that it limits the reasons as to why a character would choose to be with someone else, and thus makes potential NTR where the girl chooses to be with another man over the MC less believable. Many of the characters are already falling head over heels for the MC (e.g. sister and childhood friend), which means EITHER the MC is going to have to fumble the bag so hard that they are no longer putty in his hands, which only serves to make the MC less likable/believable; OR are going to be involved in some kind of ultra-contrived NTR scenario that lacks much emotional weight (blackmail, being tricked, etc), which likewise weakens the characterization of the involved LIs. Each of these elements combine to give me the impression that neither the NTR nor harem elements will be delivered particularly well (the dev even outright stated there will be no harem elements), so I don’t have high hopes for the narrative of future updates. The writing quality is also generally poor; as many have already pointed out much of the game (and ESPECIALLY the opening) is incredibly verbose. I think the entire script for each scene could be slashed in half and the game would be better for it.

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